Eve Buys a New Car

Part 2: (continuing the experiment of writing in 3rd person)

The morning broke early. Eve rolled into the shower at the terrifying hour of 7:45am. The lovely Sarah drove her through the horrific bumper to bumper traffic to the car dealership. Luckily, the two girls made it 7 miles in just under 45 minutes!

Sarah left Eve to the mercy of the car dealer, and Eve pretended as though she was not desperately seeking to buy a car. She searched through the cars and finally arrived at the car she had been waiting for.


She smiled at the gold Hyundai Elantra. It seemed to smile back. It said to her, “Eve–my name starts with an ‘E’ too! And so did your Escort! We are meant to be together!!”

Eve thought, “Wait, I should struggle over this! This shouldn’t be so easy!” But as she realized that this lovely car was a small sedan that would get great gas mileage, and that this car was only 3 years old–and when they told her that it was hers for only $6,000–she just had to have it.

So she bought it.

And now, Eve and her Elantra will live happily ever after. And if Eve decides to ever name a child Elantra–well–don’t be entirely surprised.

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